Animal simile
Susan is described in the following passage: "She stopped laughing and screamed, like an animal falling upon a spear." Russell compares Susan to being like an “animal falling upon a spear” to emphasize how horrific her scream sounds.
Cloaked in shadow metaphor
As Susan and her father enter the rectory they are described in the following way: "As the door of the rectory finally opened, thrusting a yellow wedge of light into the darkness, these two made sure they were cloaked in shadow." Russell uses the metaphor “cloaked in shadow” to create a sense of mystery and intrigue around these characters.
Sexuality metaphor
Gregory considers that Susan’s behavior could be caused by repressed sexuality, describing it as a “wildly onrushing river terminating in a roaring waterfall.” This metaphor suggests that repressed sexuality accumulates more power and force, according to Gregory.
Sadness simile
When Father Halloran leaves, Gregory’s “gay mood dropped from him like a cape.” This simile emphasizes Gregory’s sudden drop in mood, as he is confronted with his new life in a smaller parish.
