Furniture Scraping
Updike's spare descriptions have a powerful effect in that they only provide the reader with a small detail, but that detail suggests a whole constellation of consequences. An example of these descriptions is the line that describes Jack hearing his wife start to paint downstairs. Updike describes the moment when Jack is just beginning to enjoy the rhythm of the story, "but downstairs a chair scraped, and he realized he must get down to help Claire paint the living-room woodwork" (345). This simple sound suggests a whole host of obligations and resentments simmering just below the surface of Jack and Claire's marriage.
Fairytale Imagery
Updike describes Jack's fairytale landscape in fairly recognizable, cliché terms. There is the "deep dark woods," "the tiptop" of "a very big tree" where "an enormous wise old owl" resides (345). While the fairytale imagery is not extensive, it certainly helps to anchor the story in a long tradition of fairytale tropes and archetypes.