Michigan State University
Finding Veterinary Medicine through Research Animals
Your essay [Personal Statement] should answer why you want to pursue a career in veterinary medicine. Although there is no set of rules mandating what a strong personal statement should include, here are a few tips to help you successfully craft an effective personal statement: Explain a defining moment that helped steer you toward a career in veterinary medicine. Consider using that moment as the focal point of your essay.Be original and thoughtful: Discuss how you would contribute to the profession and patient care, all of which will help you stand out from other applicants.As you are telling us why you want to pursue a career in veterinary medicine, explain why you are a good candidate for veterinary school. Ask yourself—in a pile of 100 applications, would I enjoy reading my statement? Be sure to convey your passion for veterinary medicine in your statement. Many of you have had meaningful experiences with animals or veterinarians as children and these are important but should only be mentioned briefly. Your application materials already contain a summary of your accomplishments, so avoid repeating information from your transcripts or reference letters. Give yourself time to organize your thoughts, write well and edit as necessary. Ask yourself if this essay is a good representation of your character, ideals, and aspirations. Don't forget to proofread!
I initially saw obtaining hearing aids as admitting defeat to a disability. Being Hard of Hearing, I struggled with following conversations for years. Even after learning three foreign languages to communicate better, I realized in college that I needed hearing aids to keep up with my classmates. My hearing aids brought me unprecedented independence, empowering me as a student, dancer, and disability advocate. My curiosity about hearing prostheses was piqued.
I joined Dr. Elizabeth Olson's lab to study cochlear physiology. Though focusing on post-mortem tissue in my project, I also assist my lab mates' in vivo studies after learning how to handle guinea pigs, gerbils, and mice; suture; and deliver anesthesia. When I injected a guinea pig with a euthanasia cocktail for the first time, an amalgam of pride and grief washed over me. While I savored my growing responsibilities, I felt the sorrow inherent in watching the heart rate readings plummet. After everyone left the lab for the day, I sewed the ear back on. I felt compelled to return dignity to the guinea pig who contributed to our research.
To understand how to optimize care for laboratory animals, I volunteered at Columbia's Institute of Comparative Medicine. I padded a...
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