Genre
Autobiography/Essay collection/Coming of Age (bildungsroman)
Setting and Context
Fresno, California during the 1950’s and 1960’s
Narrator and Point of View
First-person narration by the author
Tone and Mood
Nostalgic, wistful, and ironic
Protagonist and Antagonist
Protagonist: Gary Soto. Antagonist: Soto’s stepfather, whom his married just a little over two years after his father died.
Major Conflict
The conflict that unifies much of the narrative—loosely—is that between innocence and experience. Soto is honest about what young Gary does not know yet at the time the stories took place. Collectively speaking, the essays serve to create pathway toward Gary’s transition to maturity.
Climax
In this particular example of a coming-to-age narrative, the story unusually reaches its climax and conclusion at the juncture in which innocence gives way to experience. The book arrives at its climax with the words “Because we were seventeen, something had to happen.”
Foreshadowing
Ironically, the book comes to a conclusion with final lines that serves as foreshadowing: “I thought of Braly Street and family, some of whom were now dead, and how when Uncle returned from the Korean War, he slept on a cot on the sunporch. We had yet to go and come back from our war and find ourselves a life other than the one we were losing.”
Understatement
N/A
Allusions
Allusions to The Honeymooners and I Love Lucy suggest the time period in which the stories are set: “He never laughed at Jackie Gleason's bug-eyed jokes, Red Skelton's hobo walk, or Lucille Balls's bosom bulging a hundred chicken eggs.”
Imagery
The opening words of this collection are “I killed ants here” and references will echo back to this opening throughout the book. Multiple stories include descriptions of red ants although none of the stories are actually about them. They seem to exist mostly as imagery for the purpose of making a comparison between humans and the ants.
Paradox
N/A
Parallelism
As previously mentioned, a parallel is drawn between the world of humans and the world of red ants in several of the essays spread throughout the collection.
Metonymy and Synecdoche
“Hate was in my heart” and “I received a spanking that caused hate in my heart for a good two hours” both engage heart as a metonym for love.
Personification
“The ants were red with anger when the siren started and the workers in front of Charlie's Market stopped their chewing, then chewed again when they thought it was safe.”