Settlers of the Marsh
what is ineffective in the story?
like literary devices. or any component of the story that didnt work well?
like literary devices. or any component of the story that didnt work well?
I'm not sure about the literary devices, but I did not enjoy the large amount of information the author attempted to cram into such a short novel (my opinion). Outside of the enormous lapses in time, I thought it was a decent read.